My Photo
Blog powered by Typepad
Member since 02/2006

« PNG turns to China for help with tuna processing investment | Main | In the chasm of change: do its agents often feel alone? »

10 August 2019

Comments

Feed You can follow this conversation by subscribing to the comment feed for this post.

Philip Fitzpatrick

That's a very good poem Tychicus.

Stark and minimalist with just the right level of imagery.

Reminds me of the poetry of Stephen Crane.

The only minor criticism is the use of the archaic 'tis'. I think 'its' would work as well and fit the rest of the poem better.

Verify your Comment

Previewing your Comment

This is only a preview. Your comment has not yet been posted.

Working...
Your comment could not be posted. Error type:
Your comment has been saved. Comments are moderated and will not appear until approved by the author. Post another comment

The letters and numbers you entered did not match the image. Please try again.

As a final step before posting your comment, enter the letters and numbers you see in the image below. This prevents automated programs from posting comments.

Having trouble reading this image? View an alternate.

Working...

Post a comment

Comments are moderated, and will not appear until the author has approved them.

Your Information

(Name and email address are required. Email address will not be displayed with the comment.)