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11 February 2017

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Thank you Robin. I was trying a new format where there are three narrators, Ghatane-Lulú, Katie and the writer trying to tell these two persons stories.

When the writer writes in the first person, the story comes out well. Reading it like it is on PNG Attitude, it doesn't have the emotions the writer wants to portray.

I might abandon the format.

Well done, Baka. It's certainly a sad and melancholy reflection on life and times.

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