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02 July 2014

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And then, like the son of hades, I rose out from my cousin - the ocean.

And I drowned the bees by the scent of my elder - the sand.

The bees choked and suffocated to my dismay, but, I longed for them to understand that this is not their place.

And they should respect it - the beautiful children, and their children's children ... that you could only find in the memory in the arms of the young lady.

Thank you for your comments Caroline & Obed. I wanted to give my adoptive city of Port Moresby character, soul & history. I hope readers who read 'City Spirit' - especially the residents of Port Moresby - will begin to give the city the respect it deserves.

Beautiful Piece!!

Mi hard lo todok...

Thank you very much for your kind reviews Minol, Philip, Bob and John. You all have a beautiful day!

Yes a gem and quite poetic, and should I add prophetic too.

What a talent!

That's beautiful. Every sentence a gem.

I think PNG Attitude has discovered another amazing talent.

Wow! That is deep. She still has it in her.

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